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Suggestions for article improvement

Here are a set of ideas to improve the article from an Intertwine "Evaluating an Article" session.

Set of Ideas:

In the history section, towards the end of the fourth paragraph, citations on hamburgers in Hamburg, Germany should be included.
The second sentence in the Ingredients section seems like a personal opinion.
Religious section is not relevant to the central themes of a cheeseburger
Citation for the great plains and cattle ranching in the History section in the first sentence.
Reference #5 does not take you to Pasadena Sun. It doesn't have any info on it about cheeseburgers.
Maybe have a "Hamburger Records" or "Popular culture" section for inclassifiable information
Article 26 seems unreliable. New York Post is heavily slanted right.
Reference #11 is a blog post, which should not be included as reference in Wikipedia.
Ideas by Nmermoud, Msaimeevo, Christopher Sanders (user: sande2cj), PinkPanther4597, Sloth36, Nathan Blottie - Danku, ElizabethOgunsuyi — Preceding unsigned comment added by PinkPanther4597 (talk • contribs) 19:29, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I believe these are all great improvements. My peers and I came up with the following review during an Intertwine session. A good lead section. It includes what goes on a cheeseburger and the types of cheeses that normally go on the cheeseburger. Very detailed and unbiased. Maybe there could be more talk about cows, and the ways of getting the meat. Including more religious beliefs would be great as well. For example, in India people do not eat beef. Also, some of the sources do not appear to be reliable. To better improve this article, the sources should be re-evaluated and the article expanded upon. The specific source would be the one referring to the bible. maljohns (talk) 19:28, 4 February 2018 (UTC) Tamaracyoung (talk) 19:31, 4 February 2018 (UTC) (19:35, 4 February 2018 (UTC))[reply]

Shannonkhod (talk) 19:32, 4 February 2018 (UTC)Shannon[reply]

Impossible Burger

Our Intertwine team added an internal link to the Impossible Foods page. Impossible Foods has developed an all-plant patty that mimics beef. We added this to the ingredients section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sydney Stephens (talk • contribs) 20:20, 4 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

(Interwine evaulating an article session) opinion on the article

Structure of the article:
- the lead section of the article is pretty clear and straightforward, but it omits certain sections (like those for "Hamburgers") such as cheeseburgers around the world, unusual cheeseburgers, etc.
-"Variations" section to provide clearer information about different ingredients that can be used, etc.
- I would of like for the lead to have a sentence or even a few words on where the cheese burger orginated.

Balanced/neutral coverage:
- the balance of the article is neutral/unbiased, but at least in the "Religious" section of the article, they only briefly talk about Judaism/Kosher food laws without mentioning other religions (ex. Islam/Halal food laws).
-I agree. This article was not balanced when it came to giving information on other religions. It did not touch on any other religion.

Reliable sources:
- the links generally work, but there is one citaton needed for tofu. Isha9 (talk) 19:20, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]